مقایسه تاثیر بازخورد برخط معلم و همتایان بر بهبود کیفیت نگارش فراگیران ایرانی زبان انگلیسی

نوع مقاله: مقاله پژوهشی

نویسندگان

دانشگاه پیام نور تهران

چکیده

توسط معلم و گروه همتا میپردازد. تاثیر انواع بازخورد بر توانایی نگارش فراگیران، نوع بازخورد ارائه شده توسط زبان آموزان و دقت بازخورد ارائه شده توسط زبانآموزان مورد بررسی قرار گرفتند. دانشجویان سه کلاس که در رشته های زبان و ادبیات انگلیسی و آموزش زبان انگلیسی تحصیل میکردند در این مطالعه شرکت نمودند. به فراگیران یکی از کلاسها بازخورد برخط توسط معلم داده شد. در دو کلاس دیگر بازخورد توسط گروه همسان ارائه شد، که در یک کلاس به صورت سنتی و در کلاس دیگر به صورت برخط بود. بررسی اطلاعات جمع آوری شده نشان داد که زبان آموزانی که بازخورد برخط (همسان و یا معلم) دریافت کردند در امتحان پایانی عملکرد بهتری در نگارش نسبت به گروهی که بازخورد سنتی دریافت کردند داشتند. نتایج همچنین نشان دادند که فراگیرانی که در گروه بازخورد برخط همسان بودند در مقایسه با گروه بازخورد سنتی تعداد بیشتری بازخورد مرتبط با محتوا ارائه دادند. یافته های پژوهش نشان دادند که زبان آموزانی که در گروه بازخورد برخط بودند در ارائه بازخورد صحیح موفقتر از گروه بازخورد سنتی بودند. نتایج همچنین نشان دادند که فراگیران کم سوادتر در گروههای برخط بیش از دانشجویان گروه سنتی در نگارش پیشرفت داشتند.

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عنوان مقاله [English]

A comparative study of the efficacy of teacher and peer online written corrective feedback on ِِِEFL learners' writing ability

نویسنده [English]

  • Mohammad Hamed Hoomanfard
Payame-Noor University, Tehran
چکیده [English]

The present study explored different aspects of online teacher and peer feedback. The effects of the different online and conventional types of feedback on the students’ writing ability, the types (content/ form) of the feedback that students provided, the accuracy of the comments, as well as the patterns of incorporating comments. The participants of the present study were 60 students participating in three intact classes, majoring in English language Literature and TEFL. The students in one of the groups received online teacher feedback. The students of two other groups were provided with peer response; in one of the peer response classes, the feedback was exchanged through the conventional paper- and-pencil format, while in the other class, the students swapped comments through a website. The required data was collected by 3 the students’ texts, written during the semester and a semi-structured interview. In the present study, seven queries were raised and attempted to be answered. At first, the study checked the effect of different online and conventional feedback methods on the students’ writing ability in the short and long run. The results indicated that the students in the experimental groups outperformed those in the conventional peer feedback group in the immediate and delayed post-tests, while it was not the case in the short run. This implied that online peer and teacher feedback might not show their impact on the improvement of students writing in the short run and any changes in the students’ writing ability would happen in the course of time, at least one semester (around more than four months) after the experiment has terminated.
The study also investigated whether the low-level students in different online and conventional feedback group would improve their writing equally. The findings indicated the superiority of the online courses in helping the low-level students. The students in online groups used internet to increase their on-task interactions; the students also took advantage of online resources. The students in online groups were found to use others’ texts as models. They also reflected on their writings, and could check their progress more easily. They also stated that they were less anxious while challenging the comments of their peer or the instructor.
The third research question dealt with the type of feedback that students in online teacher and peer feedback groups provided. The results revealed that the online medium could affect the students’ patterns of giving feedback and directed the focus of the students from merely local aspects to global and suprasentential aspects. Although the students in both groups managed to give comments on both global and local aspects, the online group students gave significantly more global comments.
The fourth research question tapped the accuracy of the students’ comments in the online and conventional groups. The findings showed that the online medium was successful in reducing the number of miscorrections. The students in the online peer feedback group gave significantly more sound comments, and significantly fewer inaccurate comments than their counterparts in the conventional group did.
The present study also investigated the effect of online feedback medium on the students’ pattern of incorporating the peer comments. Although at the beginning of the experiment, the students incorporated just around thirty percent of the comments, this level increased two times in the conventional group, and more than three times in the online peer feedback group at the end of the semester. The results also revealed that the online group students became more successful in distinguishing the corrections and miscorrections and deciding upon the incorporation of them in the second drafts.
The sixth research question investigated the students’ attitudes toward and perceptions about peer feedback. The students in both online and conventional peer feedback groups were interviewed. The findings showed that the students in both groups had positive attitude towards and perceptions of peer feedback. The students in the online group had significantly more positive attitude towards and perceptions of peer feedback. The students also enumerated time-independency, place-independency, use of online resources, and negotiation over the comments as the major advantages of the online peer feedback. The only disadvantage of this type of feedback, stated by the students, was the internet disconnections. With regard to their preference, none of the students disliked online peer feedback; the preferences were of two types: the first group favored just the online medium, and the other group preferred a combination of online and face-to-face peer feedback.
In sum, the results of the study revealed that the students in online teacher and peer feedback groups significantly improved more than those in the conventional peer feedback group. Other factors like the accuracy of the comments, the focus of the comments, and the revision patterns, also, indicated the superiority of the online feedback. The higher levels of students’ attitudes towards and perceptions of peer feedback of the students in the online group showed the superiority of online peer feedback.

کلیدواژه‌ها [English]

  • Writing
  • second language
  • feedback
  • Accuracy
  • online learning